it does look pretty gay but ur a female this stuff comes natural to u. it looks aright i dont think you need anymore changes to it

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idunno, maybe thange the BG tone a bit. The character isnt standing out like she should

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Maybe more clouds would look nice But I already love the picture the way it is :3

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love it! Great colors. :] i love rainbow thiiingggsss. ahah. and i'm straight. so yay for rainbows.

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wooooooooo. pretty colors!!!

i don't think theres anything that you need to change on this to sell it i would but it!!.... if i had money ><

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Wow~
The colors are so sparkly. I'm in a trace
The way you colored the piece gives off an enchanting effect, I really like it
I think Blue turned out nice in the end X3

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So colorful~ :''D I love this<33 Very nice.

*o* Ahaha nothign wrong with drawing EXTREMELY girly things.
I think it looks wonderful! Alot of pastel candy-colors never hurt anyone >D

Hahah! She reminds me of cotton candy for some reason X3 But I REALLY love how you colored her.
I think the style really fits the lineart. It doesn't seem like it would look as sweet with bright colors.

And her lips XD omg <3 They remind me of Miwako from Paradice Kiss!

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Those clothes really...bring out her finer details. Mmm, now I really DO wanna taste the rainbow. XD

Alright, see...here's the thing. It's pretty much about personal tastes with this pic. There are a few things I can point out, but they're not absolute.

Here are some things I would like to see...

1. less clothes... (joking)

The shades are too bright for me. Just personal taste. Hmm, you don't have to change the colors, just use darker shades.

Perhaps the shading should be a little more 3-dimensional [link]
...What I mean to say is that she looks a little flat with that castle in the back.

Hmm, she's really bent over @.@ (not that its a bad thing) peeping tom is having a heyday behind all those glass windows... XD It would help with perspective if she looked a little more 3-d ish, but maybe she just needs to be a little more under the horizon?

Also, I think the castle should be a bit further back...check this out...something like this...I guess, but with your own style. [link]

I would really like a poster with perspective like this...I guess it 'expands' the room. *shrugs* what do you think?

Now, here are some ideas for the eyes. (Some of your work that really caught mine)[link]
or [link]

Things me like:

You did a great job with the body and head of the girl. Nice lines.

The bubbly clouds are awesome, keep them.

I also like the brick/crystalline walls in the distance, but some of the towers look to be leaning a bit.

I'm not sure that the rigidity of the walls matches the fluff and playful outfit of the girl. Hmm... Maybe you should put some spirals, and stars on the castle. Maybe star windows or something. Spiral towers and such.

Wait! If you make this a night scene, you can make the shapes on her outfit glow in the dark! Plus, if it's a night scene, you can light up the castle and stuff. Really bring out the rainbow. It would make any gay man proud! XD

The mosaic sky is creative, but i'm not sure it matches. Perhaps she should try on some fishnet stockings.

Lots to say. Hope this helps. Just throwing some ideas out there. It's a real eye-catcher though. Good Luck with your poster!

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